Urgent Extra Credit Blog!

Well, after rereading my previous blog on 5 part paragraph, I remembered the things that I did wrong on the last paragraph. The main idea that I had written was about me not writing interesting transitions. So this time around I tried to keep the reader reading with new and different transitions. On my last 5 part paragraph, I had also forgotten one of the commentary sentences. And in the spirit of fixing my mistakes, I printed out a rough draft and highlighted ever part of the paragraph in a special color so I could make sure I got ever part! So I am crossing my fingers that this paragraph will be even better than the last one! Positive thoughts :) Anyways, the class time to work on the paragraph was very much needed, so thank you!