Leah (Comic Strip): I thought the type of comic was very interesting, and I give her props for the idea and the layout. But I didn't think all the literary elements where are there. I can see the theme, but I don't think the project showed foreshadowing and all the themes, just mostly the one theme of corruption of power.
Kayla (Animal Pyramid): I really enjoyed this project for many reasons! I thought the idea first off, was really good and different. I also love how the project shows what classes the animals where at the beginning off the book, and how the classes change by the end. The project shows irony great, and the theme of power and the pyramid symbolized the farms invisible power struggles.
Sarah (Movie): I thought the movie was really fun to watch, but it wasn't everything I had hoped for. The scenes where repeated many times throughout the trailer and short movie, which made the movie seem longer than it really was. I thought the movie showed the theme very good, and the irony of the farm that was written in the book. But I feel the movie could have had more time put in, to make it better.
Britney (picture): I enjoyed the picture and I thought that is showed off her talents as an artist. And I could easily tell the symbolism that she was trying to show in drawing this picture. But maybe some more time could be put in to make the picture a little bit clearer, but other than that, really good!
Donna (video): I thought Donna's video was really cute, and I thought it had the right idea. But I think some more time could have gone into the video, like singing the "Beasts of England" song themselves, and not having a YouTube video singing it. But that said, I thought the video gave a lot of information and showed the audience what they where trying to say.
Reagan (poem): I loved Reagan's poem so much, I thought the idea was amazing and the poem showed all the literary elements. You can also just tell that she took tons of time making the poem the best that it could be, and in my eyes, I believe it is really good.
Melanie (power point): I liked the idea of a power point, and I thought all the information was in the power point to show the irony in the novel. But the only thing bad about the project, was it was kinda hard to read off the power point because she filmed the power point off a computer screen.
Olivia (poem): I thought the poem was good, and used diction that showed the more serious side of the novel. The one thing I would have liked to see more of was not just one haiku, maybe a couple that showed more of the novel and not just the serious side.
Sean (comic): I really like the comic and I thought you could see that he enjoyed the story and he took time to make the comic. I also thought that it had the perfect mix of pictures and text to get all the literary techniques across.
Alena (movie): Well I thought the video was very well planed out and I liked that they used stuffed animals and real people in the movie. I also loved the choice of music and all the words that popped up in between scenes.
Now after looking at and watching all the projects, I still feel really confident in my project. I put so much time and effort into my song, I feel that I could not have made it any better. I also think that my project showed all the literary elements that where shown in the book. And I explained them in my song and in the two paragraphs I wrote with my song.
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